RE: JUST US THREE!

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Wow! You played that well. The emotional connection and suspense throughout...and the build-up. At first I thought he may be an abuser, and you closed the door on that one quickly. Then I was certain she was seeking forgiveness for having cheated physically and that ironically he may have ended up finding someone else and just be waiting to break it to her gently. And then you break it to us as to what happened and the emotions flow. Beautifully written @deraaa. !PIZZA !ALIVE !LUV



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Ahhhhhhh.... You saw through all that. I'm really glad. I love that you love it. I'm however open to corrections anytime. Thank you so much ❤️😩

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No correction lol. Only praise for a well-told beautifully crafted story.

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