The Captain, Esme and the Umibozu πŸ‹πŸŒŠπŸ¬πŸ™πŸ¦ˆπŸŸ

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"You've got spirit, I'll give you that much', the Captain laughed. He opened his mouth to let escape the guffaw that had been building in his belly. It was not captain like to laugh so, but the child had caused such tension on the ship that the emotion he usually shoved deep in his gut had been fermenting like the second mates home brew and could not help but belch from the airlock of his oesophegal tract. There was a faint taste of seagulls and salt in his mouth and he reminded himself to brush his teeth this week.

'You can't kill it!' Esme's legs were cycling mid air. He had hooked her from her britches to the bowsprit and the bities were gnashing the water below. 'The King will be furious!'

'The King?' the Captain roared. 'That infantile, idiotic, ignorant, ignoble, inept, incompetent IGNORAMUS?'

'He's not a fan', the quartermaster whispered to the boatswain. Last week he had sworn for ten minutes about the royal command for all ships to give up the chase for the gargantuan sea creature, using adjectival phrases largely beginning with 's', including self-aggrandizing, which was a new one for the quartermaster, necessitating a peep at Johnson's dictionary. It was true. The King did have a tendency to big note his achievements. No doubt if they did kill the Captains equivalent of the white whale, the King would claim he held the harpoon.

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'But..' The stitches of Esme's britches were beginning to pop. 'Captain, if you kill the Umibozu, we will all die! Please!' She had not stowed away on the Captains ship for a year, vandalising the weapons of sea monster destruction and putting laxatives in the crews gruel, to die now. The Umibozu needed her, and they all needed the Umibozu. She had to make him see.

The Captain's impressive crimson and snow peppered moustache gloomed over his black-as-the-ace-of-spades beard. It was a beard that demanded authority, so it was no suprise he had risen so quickly up the salt splattered ranks of the New Kingdom's armada. He has used his new power and might to hunt the Umibozu since it was first sighted off the coast of Japan, when that island had fallen into the sea in the Great Storm of '46. It was not the only landmass to disappear after the quakes and tsunamis of that year. Much of the islands in Indonesia also were lost, and the Captains family, who were at home in the Maldives, were never heard from them again. He still had nightmares of returning to the islands, only to see endless, infinite sea, his home underwater like the fabled Atlantis. Death to the Umibozu it was. The high waters were already here - hell was right behind.

'He will never relent' the boatswain whispered the quartermaster. 'But our lives depend on it'.

The quartermaster nodded. He had seen it with his own eyes, the Umibozu moving through the radioactive waters of the Pacific, and the Geiger counter no longer showing readings in it's wake, the incessant cicada like code of it's alarm silenced as the great creature passed. With each flushing of water through it's great gills, it rid the ocean of toxic waste, from subatomic particles to plastics that mimicked jellyfish, absorbing them into it's being. Rusting containers, plastic ducks, billions of water bottles, prophylactics, giant thongs, abandoned yachts, all disappeared.

Yet the Japanese had named it for a terrifying creature from their mythology, a sea spirit that appears to sailors on calm seas that have turned tempestuous and tumultuous, as the ocean did that day of the Great Quake. It was a name that invoked fear and loathing. Who else to blame for the death of thousands, the nuclear power stations spilling waste into already ailing seas? But this new monster untrapped from the deep wasn't humanoid like it's namesake, but rather whale like, although a blue whale to it would be like a flea beside an elephant. Still, the name and reputation stuck. The Armada of the New Kingdom had been chasing it for many years, and it became the scapewhale of all the world's manmade problems. The Kingdom had launched a media campaign against it that ensured global support, both psychological and financial, and funneled all angst and sea military might into hunting it.

The Captain would not be swayed against it, despite having his doubts about the King's ability to make wise decisions.

'Save that murdering, malingering, malignant, malicious, malformed MONSTER?' the Captain alliterated, as he always did when he was angry, furious, enraged or all three. 'That mother - '

But suddenly the water swirled and rose, the ship moving with it. As if on queue, summoned by Esme's pleading for it's life, the beast moved through the water to reveal itself, a gargantuan and magnificent miracle birthed from tragedy to save a dying ocean. Iridescent scales laced it's sea black flesh, twinkling in the afternoon sunshine. Great birds whirled in it's wake, albatrosses and eagles, gannetts and puffins, pelagic birds that were rarely seen anymore due to the overfishing that had turned the world's waters into wastelands. Huge shoals of fish swirled in happy eddies by it's flanks, chased by playful dolphins long thought extinct. Great manta rays flapped their underwater wings gracefully by it's expansive nose. Seals and walruses blubbered by and a family of humpback whales breached behind, dwarfed by the Umibozu's colossal tail.

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'See?' cried Esme, her tears joining the salty fray beneath her as the world-saver gracefully slid by, protecting an entire ecosystem of crustaceans, mammals, fish and birds as it went.

For once the Captain was lost for words. Kneeling on the deck his lips were moving but no adjectives were forthcoming. It was as if the white whale he had been chasing was but a dream. Here was God, and more besides. His family seemed small sacrifice - indeed, they honoured the Umibozu with their deaths.

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The quartermaster had never seen the man so paralysed, so moved, and placed a gentle hand on his shoulder with deep respect and affection. He stood between the man and the rest of the awed crew, hiding the Captain's rather unmanly tears. The Captain still had a job to do, after all. Together with Esme, the quartermaster saw with diamond clarity, they would spend the rest of their days following the greatest sea creature that had ever lived, sworn to protect it as it brought the world's oceans back to joyful life.




This is a response to the Ink Well prompt 'spirit'. The images are created on Adobe Express and use images from Unsplash to creat the collage

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I read it as if I was following an exciting movie scene. It was really gripping. congratulations man

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The Captain's constant use of alliterations is very amusing. πŸ˜‚
Especially since his aim is to show off his intelligence.
I love the way Umibozu was described, so real. The Captain's lack of adjectives was a surprise too. :)
Wonderful story.

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Thanks. It made me laugh as I wrote it. I think he was just the kinda guy that alliterated when over emotional 🀣

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Great writing. I was rooting for the captain's demise but you gave him redemption πŸ™‚

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Oh I was always on his side. He just didn't realise the beast was so magnificent and world saving.

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I envy you people that can write like this, creating entire worlds from think air :)

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Thankyou. Hive has brought forth the creative writer that I was as a child - I thought she'd gone!

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Ohh, what a wonderful series of images you have captured in my head. It was a very delightful text to read. It's like a happy ending to Moby Dick, your writing is sublime and hilarious.

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What better setting for such a tale than the sea? The symbolism of man vs. nature is manifest most clearly in seafaring stories. Conjuring up the mythic chase after the White Whale helps us to frame this yarn in our psyches.

It is appropriate that a young person would try to protect the future of the planet, while the older person persists in destructive behavior. Is this not the place we find ourselves now? The strongest voices for protecting the environment come from the young, who see their future being eclipsed by the foolhardy policies of another generation.

Your 'salty' language wears well here. The description of the captain is priceless. It captures not only his physical appearance but his personality.

Thank you for sharing this 'spirited' story with us. We appreciate that you engage with other members of the community.

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Is this not the place we find ourselves now? The strongest voices for protecting the environment come from the young, who see their future being eclipsed by the foolhardy policies of another generation.

This is exactly what I meant by the piece. I started with an alliterative sea Captain and a stowaway after a sea monster, and ended up making a statement about the environment, the state of the oceans, and the beautiful dream of a solution, so long as we could open our eyes to it, and not be blinded by propaganda. The white whale had to be referenced - it helped me frame the Captain as obsessive, stubborn and driven. I did adore how he was so paralysed by the beauty of the creature he realised how misled he'd been.

It's so fascinating, this creative process - I start with one line, and it grows into something quite interesting. I did quite fall in love with the Captain. I had to google a few seafaring terms hahaha - what did we do before the internet?

Have immensely enjoyed reading the work of others this week. Thanks so much for your feedback and I appreciate you dropping by.

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A great written piece, with infinite details and references, that invite us to make our imagination creative. You manage very well to add words of use between sailors and it is very pleasant. Excellent work.

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A delicious sea inspired tale river; how delightful!
Not so much the Captain, but I did enjoy the King's description. And when concern was placed on the stitches of Esme's britches, I felt like my morning was only getting brighter. I've not read Moby Dick, beyond the White Whale reference, or the Ishmael/Esme play, were there more allusions popping through?

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Oh how did I miss this comment? It means so much to me when you comment on my creative stuff!

No, that's the only allusions - it's been years since I read Moby Dick and I didn't even think of Ish/Esme but that could work a treat! I'm glad you enjoyed it - I felt super proud of this one and hoped some big names would pop by and read it!

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Wow... Such vivid descriptions painting clear and beautiful imaginations. I enjoyed the story all through especially the captain's exclamations and his eventual submission to the powers of nature!

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I'm glad you enjoyed it .. I loved writing him into existence!

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Lovely read - you are very imaginative. i enjoyed this seafaring adventure with the mythical creature. I love the captain - his language - it was like a movie and also the awareness highlighted about the environment and the happy ending.

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I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Your comment means a lot to me. I adored the captain that arose out of my imagination! I think I fell a little in love with him. He has many seafaring adventures up his sleeve I reckon!

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This is incredible! Have you seen the movie princess mononoke? This tale vibrated with the same power of that story- The earth provides what is needed to rebalance. The spirit in that story is a skyscraper sized elk-like guy, who heals the forest. I bet they are distant cousins hehe

So much force behind one of the background messages here- "Hey we should really stop trashing the oceans, they are in trouble." By the end we are gladdened that the earth created a mega whale of a whale (A whale's whale, if you will) to cleanse the mess we've made, right along with the captain! He now realizes his personal loss may mean that other families CAN live years from now, that if this doesn't happen, many more will die.

Wowza 😁 That's some darn fine writing! Thanks for sharing πŸ€—

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OH goodness thanks sooo much for popping by @grindan, I know I did hint pretty hard haha. Thanks sooo much for your insightful comment. I don't know Mononoke but feel like I should go and watch it now!

He now realizes his personal loss may mean that other families CAN live years from now, that if this doesn't happen, many more will die.

Yes, indeed - that kinda broke my heart too, that line. Sometimes characters just feel and do things that you don't seem to write into existance but channel, in a way. I really felt for the guy andmy heart melted a bit when he realised his family needed to die for the greater good.

Thanks again for your beautiful comment xx

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