Poem: Live (Vive) [EN/ES]
Live
Feel...
like a child, natural and deep
Touch...
like the breeze passing through the bush
Walk...
as the earth does, constant
Breathe...
as the mountain does, provides air,
Hugs...
as a mother does when she sees her child, sincerely,
Smiles...
as an old man does, without measure,
It cries...
As nature does, it unburdens itself,
She loves...
as a madman does, without ties.
But above all live, because time is fast and short, we are passengers.
Español
Vive
Siente...
como un niño, natural y profundo
Toca...
como la brisa al pasar en el monte
Camina...
como lo hace la tierra, constante
Respira...
como lo hace la montaña, brinda aire,
Abraza...
como lo hace una madre al ver al hijo, sinceramente,
Sonríe...
como lo hace un anciano, sin medidas,
Llora...
Como lo hace la naturaleza, se desahoga,
Ama...
como lo hace un loco, sin ataduras.
Pero sobre todo vive, porque el tiempo es rápido y corto, somos pasajeros.
Text authored by:
Yenny Aldazora
DRA
¡Thanks for you reading!
It's very important to live life and not just exist.
Beautifully written.
Isn't it important to live every moment as if it were your last? You should love the one you love as if it were the last, even though you know it is not the last.
Brilliantly written.
Thanks for reading and your support.
I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Happy day.
This poem has a very interesting structure that gives it a nice flow. I enjoyed how you used the different stages of life and contrasted them with the natural elements to demonstrate the wonder of life and living. Very nice!
Thank you very much for your comment and support. I'm glad you liked the poem.
A good day.
I think we all need to live, especially with that freedom that dreams give us, but we are so tied to the time that daily reality offers us that we only see living from the point of existence as citizens. You have written a very pleasing poem, greetings.
Our soul / spirit might be eternal and a fabulous ingredient to enriching consciousness but our experience in this 3D realm is restricted by the measurement of time. Therefore squeezing the juice out of life is essential. Smooth, a pleasure to read.