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Sounder to me is like an Inertia of musings, it's like someone experiencing a whole new reality inside their thoughts. I'm not sure if I'm totally correct really but lol I think I've once done a poem like that ponder to sonder

Specs of guts of dust,

look the /u:/ sound there and the rhythmic effect is definitely heavenly really Wow.

You painted vivid imageries of the regular rush hour of people and you know overseeing their everyday activities in a really picturesque pattern that drove home the beauty of this work. What a blast buddy wow. It's utterly beautiful

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it's like someone experiencing a whole new reality inside their thoughts.

Yeah, to be honest when I'm in a really creative mind the way I see the world can be like an altered state of reality when I'm writing poetry. Usually it's a memory, like in this poem, but the recreation enters into different dimensions.

You painted vivid imageries of the regular rush hour of people.

This poem was inspired by time I spent in London πŸ™‚

Thanks for the feedback buddy πŸ‘

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Marvelous poem. I really enjoyed hearing your thoughts and emotions, translated out from your own voice. Means so much more to have the author read it for us, as it arose from your internal thought and voice. Thanks for putting it out for us. You definitely have a way with the word. Cheers

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Thank you. It really is comments like this that keep me positive when I produce something like this and it gets ignored by the Dtube curation.

But enough of my moaning πŸ˜‚

I really enjoyed hearing your thoughts and emotions, translated out from your own voice.

I appreciate it. And especially as I've read my poetry at performance nights here in the UK many times, but have always been shy and found it a challenge. But when people enjoy the performance it makes the challenge worth it πŸ™‚πŸ‘

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