Creative Nonfiction ~ The old metal iron.

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I heard a loud bang on the floor which sounded so hard as it affected my ears. I looked down to the floor and saw an old iron already scattered around everywhere. I was dumbfounded! I was carrying a carton which my aunt told me to bring outside from under the bed in my room. Perhaps she didn't remember telling me to be careful as the bottom of the carton has been torn. I didn't know, I just lifted it up and before I know what was happening, I had destroyed the iron that looks ancient to me. At least I wasn't hurt.
What happened? Hope you aren't hurt, Busayo? Let me see it.
"No, I wasn't hurt. I am sorry, please. I didn't know the carton has been torn at the bottom."
It's okay. At least you weren't hurt. Thank God.
"Mummy, whose iron is this? This is my first time seeing something like this."
She smiled and told me to sit beside her on my bed as she was about to tell me a story. This is something I enjoy listening to whenever I am with my aunt. She always has stories of the past to share with me while she makes me laugh.
Busayo, do you see this object? Mama gave it to me some years back when she told me to start a business with it. I thought my mother never wanted the best for me; she wanted me to be a washer but I got to appreciate her later. This iron was given to my mother as a gift on her wedding day and indirectly, I inherited it.
I had just finished college when I decided to find greener pastures because I needed money to survive and not spend my whole life in the village. I went with a strong mind believing I will return home to my mother later. After two years, my sister finished from the university too and decided to find me. That was when my mother gave her the iron to give to me when she found me.
I paid so much attention as I didn't want to miss any details in the story. Perhaps I would tell my kids too. She continued.
My sister found my address. I was so happy to see her as it was unexpected. I was surprised at how she found me. I welcomed her and gave her some cold water to relax before entering the kitchen to prepare a meal for her. In the night, we were talking and it was then she opened her bag and handed this iron to me saying Mother wants me to start a laundry business. According to her, she helped people to wash their clothes and felt I could do the same here in the city.
I stared at my sister and the next thing was tears rolling down my eyes. How could my mother think of this for her child? I...I should become a maid and start washing for people. Is it that bad? I wept bitterly that night.
I looked at my aunt, her eyes were red. I could feel her voice shaking. I felt emotional too and was about to cry but I quickly cleaned the tears with the back of my hands. She might stop talking. So, I didn't let her see me like that.
We both wept! My sister consoled me after and started encouraging me to do the job. She told me how my mother kept praising me and joyously telling her she believed the business was for me. She knew I was a special and great child. When I heard those words, I felt happy within me. Though, it took me months before I began the journey because I was afraid and shy. I didn't know how to begin. I abandoned the iron and continued the job I was doing.
"What job?" I was inquisitive to know.
The job was a dirty one. I used to go from house to house to pack dirt into the lorry until I was implicated and sacked. When I saw there was no way to survive, I thought about the iron, went to pick it up, cleaned it and the work started. I went from house to house asking if they had any dirty clothes and rugs which I helped them to wash and iron and I get paid. When I had saved a lot of money and saw how productive the business was, I opened a shop and hired a girl to be there. Whenever there was work, she would call me to come over and we would both wash and iron, then get it delivered.
After many years, I thanked my mother for leading me onto that path. I cherished this object the more because it brought so much achievement to me through the business. I got customers from banks, courts, organisations etc. It was so fulfilling. Then, I knew my mother meant the best for me.
I looked at the iron and was pained I just broke an object that meant so much to her. I apologised again and she told me not to worry because she could talk about it to me. I picked the iron up and saw something written on it, "Do this business, my child". The iron is still packed and wrapped, kept in her room today.
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Awwww she loved it that much?she find it difficult to displace it
Yes, she cherished it more than anything.
Lolz ehya
This is a perfect reminder, of how sometimes the things we initially resist can turn out to be the best path for us. Nice write up
Yes, you are right. She never knew the iron was what would open the path for her. Thank you, Timix.
You are most welcome🙂
She found a path that earned her livelihood with the object she thought was of no use at first. This story has lots of lessons. Imagine she rejected the gift at first, maybe she would have not dreamt of even washing and ironing for people.
You are right. There was a lesson I got from the story. Thank you, Marynn.
Thanks so much for sharing. I love stories with great theme and impact.
What a touching story! I'm glad your aunty found her path in life by using the pressing iron. Yes, she struggled at first like most of us would do but I guess, her mother knew better. The wisdom of the aged should be taken seriously! Hehe. This is insightful. Thanks for sharing. !LUV 😊
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Yes, the aged knows better than us and we shouldn't take them for granted especially with their words. They know better. Thank God my aunt also took the path eventually which made her appreciated her mom the more.
Thanks for reading and leaving a beautiful comment.
Iron, only as single object but using this one can survive in life. Through this I received a message that no work is small. Things started to go better with time if we give effort.
Exactly, Intishar. I have learnt in life that no work is small. Everyone started from small till it turns out big. We just have to give it our efforts and keep progressing. Thanks so much for reading.
Someone once said that when you are hungry, you will discover your talents. Hahaha. Life is hard, am sure mother wouldn't have recommended washing for people and ironing for a child. But you see, you have benefited so we well from it too. For me, do you know at my age I can't iron well? Hahaha. I hate ironing 😃give me any other chore but not ironing.You have got a good talent, you can even own a laundry service.
Hehehe. I hated ironing not until I came to live with her. I spent over 10 years with her washing and ironing clothes. It has been a tough time but I learnt to love ironing which I can do without getting tired.
Hehehe. You are right that when one is hungry, he will discover his talents. That was in the case of my aunt. Lol
Thanks for stopping by ma.
Your grandma is truly remarkable, writing such words on the iron shows how supportive was
Yes, it surprised me too and grandma was a great woman. Though she died some weeks ago. I will miss her. 😢
What a fantastic story from your aunt's life! You develop the story nicely through your aunt's recollections from when she was younger, bringing a good balance between narrative, action, and dialogue. Your aunt's own journey of discovery and her changing perspectives of the impact that a simple iron had on her life is wonderful - from a symbol of denigration and oppression to one of enrichment and financial freedom. Her own mother had wisdom and insight and she has now capitalised on a seemingly bad moment (the breaking of the iron) and turned it into a sharing opportunity and teaching moment with her niece. Wonderful story and character arc in the story within a story. An interesting conflict - the gift of an iron that initially elicited sadness and despair but was one day to prove the catalyst to an empowering experience of entrepreneurship and financial freedom. A thoroughly enjoyable read.
A small point to note - you switched tenses once or twice in this piece and your presentation of dialogue should use speech marks throughout like this:
" " and the differentiation between different speakers should be done using dialogue tags instead of italicising one person's speech.
You may find this resource helpful in this regard:
How to Write Dialogue in Fiction
I really appreciate your time reading and understanding the story. You perfectly summarised greatly in your comment which I am truly honoured by it. Then, I am glad with the correction which I would work on and improve too. Thanks so much.
This was such a wonderfully told story, Princess. Rich and moving. I loved the changing perspectives and symbology of the iron in your aunt's life. Thoroughly enjoyed reading this from you! 💗 !LUV
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Wow...such a story packed with valuable lessons to learn from. Who would have believed that the same iron she was Angry about could turn out to be an open door for her. This story was so emotional. I am even wondering if mama saw a vision before she thought of sending her the iron all the way from the village to the city.. perhaps she had a revelation about her daughter? I wouldn't know but I feel there maybe a connection somehow. I really love the lesson this story carries and you did justice writing it so clearly and made it enjoyable 😍
Thank you so much Princess
You are a great writer ✍️
Your aunt never knew the value of what your grandma has placed in her hands until she explored it. This story sweet 🥰 and touchy 🥲
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Aww. I am glad you enjoyed it, Ginika. Thank you 😊
You are welcome.
Isn't this so lovely. In simple terms it can be described as a blessing in disguise. The laundry job eventually paved the way to greatness for her.
I came in through #dreemport.
Yes, blessing in disguise indeed. She thought it wasn't a good one but it became something that took a new wave for her. Thank you, Wongi.
You're most welcome ✨
Awwwn now im smiling reading 😁😁
This is a beautiful post princess hanks for sharing
#dreemerforlife
Thank you, T ✌️
Hmmm, the story is touching and at the same time amazing, I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work sis.
#dreemerforlife
Thank you so much.
You are welcome
Hmm, the story encourages us to do something legit that brings profit and pays out bill.
That job of washing for people isn't an easy job though.
Interesting story
Yes, drycleaning isn't an easy job. Thank you, Jessica.
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Wow. Thank you so much for this. I really appreciate it 🙏