Ethereal Engagement
The ethereal embodiment of an eternal emerald flame lapped under the edges of the closed bathroom door as she sat on the chilled tiled trying to force her mental state into some semblance of deciphering reality from fiction. A flame as old as time itself...white-hot yet never consuming. It had been decades since she saw this prophetic sign of horror appear....so long that she had began to embrace the hopeful belief that it was a twisted piece of her imagination and not possibly associated with reality.
For generations her family had been the bearers of the knowledge bestowed by the flickering enlightenment. She had prayed countless times to be released of this burden, yet the flame would still find her out and hiss it's devastating secrets to her. Having the knowledge of tragedy to come was enough to bear alone without the additional toil and travesty of no one believing your revelations.....no one heeding your warnings.....you were helpless to watch them continue on oblivious to the oppression hurling towards them.
The secret knowledge that came this time was the burden of serial death....the full understanding of a depraved man bent on inflicting severe pain and degradation upon others, compulsively. A monster in a man's skin fully enthralled in being the human embodiment of ancient, ritualistic evil. Driven mad from deep within with the serial slaying through the generations, lifetimes after lifetimes culminating in the psychotic gaze of this corporeal fiend.
She could see his sharp, demonic features as clearly as if she were looking at her own image in the crystalline waters of a deep-forest spring, yet as the image became more and more vivid and in focus, that ethereal flame became more and more emboldened spreading across the bathroom floor and viscously licking at her porcelain skin. She could feel the rigid lump of terror rise from deep within her soul, yet she remained powerless to stop the vision of suffering that was headed to her reality. She could only stare on into the yellow-tinted eyes of a serial killer on the path of ferocity that was yet to unfold.
All That Is Gold Does Not Glitter,
Not All Those Who Wander Are Lost
-Tolkien




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Wow, intense writing, @papacrusher! Is this a flash fiction piece, or part of a larger work? In either case, very evocative stuff.
Thank you so very much for your kind words and your support. It is just a little piece that was floating around my noggin on the way home from work.
You're very welcome! I've found that most times those little bits that float in tend to be some of my best pieces (probably because I don't tweak & rewrite them a bazillion times until it's ruined...lol).
I could certainly think of a person or two nowadays who's a ritualistic and sadistic fuck looking to inflict pain on all kinds of people! Sad that this isn't entirely fiction but really fun read. It's gotta be painful to have that ability!
Oh they definitely walk among us on a daily basis. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my post!
So lovely and powerful at the same time.
You write (and think) beautifully.
Becca 💗
Thank you so much for your compliments and for taking the time to read my post.
I'm short of words, other than to say...intense and gripping! I wouldn't want to be in your main character's shoes. 😄 You write beautifully!
Thank you so much for the compliment! Yeah, I'm glad the story stopped when it did, I don't think I want to see more of what happens...lolololol