Day 1464: 5 Minute Freewrite: Sunday - Prompt: trapdoor

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Han pasado muchos años, desde aquella trampilla sutil que tendiste a mi alma. Casi no recuerdo con exactitud, si fueron 50 u 60 años. Ya mi mente no recuerda con lucidez, pero lo que si tengo grabada en mi mente aquella gran hurtadilla que intentaste hacerme en nuestro primer encuentro de enamorados.

Many years have passed, since that subtle trapdoor you laid for my soul. I can hardly remember exactly, whether it was 50 or 60 years. My mind no longer remembers with lucidity, but what I do have engraved in my mind is that great sneak that you tried to do to me in our first meeting as lovers.

Fue todo tan claro, la cena romántica a la orilla de la playa en plena atardecer. Aquél susurro conspirador del universo que compaginaba con el sonido del viento y las olas romper a la orilla, fue tan conmovedor. Aún más, cuando me mirabas con esos ojos tiernos color esmeralda. Supe de inmediato que estaba cayendo en esa pequeña trampilla que le colocabas a mi alma. Me deje llevar por todos esos sentimientos acogedores. Que termine salvajemente en tus sábanas olor a frenesí.

It was all so clear, the romantic dinner at the edge of the beach at sunset. That conspiratorial whisper of the universe that matched the sound of the wind and the waves breaking on the shore, it was so touching. Even more, when you looked at me with those tender emerald eyes. I knew immediately that I was falling into that little trap door you were placing in my soul. I let myself be carried away by all those cozy feelings. That I ended up wildly in your sheets smelling of frenzy.

Fueron tantas trampillas, casi inocente que le colocabas día a día a mi corazón. Tanto que llegue a enloquecer de amor por tí. Llegué a ser la más fiel amante y confidente de las lujurias de amor de dos almas desbocadas, en vísperas de felicidad. Wow que magia, me hiciste alcanzar, sentía ir a la luna y venir en cómodos copos de nieve. Era vivir en mundo iluso, en el que fuí inmensamente feliz

There were so many traps, almost innocent that you placed day by day to my heart. So much that I went crazy with love for you. I became the most faithful lover and confidant of the lustful love of two unbridled souls, on the eve of happiness. Wow what magic, you made me reach, I felt to go to the moon and come in comfortable snowflakes. It was living in an illusive world, in which I was immensely happy.

No me he quejado nunca, de aquella trampilla envolvente. Me enseñó, lo bello de amar y ser amada, de sentir y hacerte sentir los gustos de una buena vida. Una vida plena, amena, sincera. No me quejare, de tu noble trampilla fiel. Seguiré recordando, aún cuándo mi cuerpo se esfume por el universo, seguirá vagando mi alma alegre, recordando esa trampilla feliz que me regalaste. Por siempre tuya, tu trampilla fiel.

I have never complained about that enveloping trap door. It taught me the beauty of loving and being loved, of feeling and making you feel the tastes of a good life. A full, pleasant, sincere life. I will not complain about your noble and faithful trapdoor. I will continue to remember, even when my body vanishes into the universe, my soul will continue to wander happily, remembering that happy trap door that you gave me. Forever yours, your faithful trapdoor.



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