Tega Jinxed Me ~ The Ink Well Prompt

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My mother once told me that infatuation is when you find someone who is perfect, Love is when you realize they aren't but it doesn't matter. I guess I wasn't in love like I thought I was or rather maybe I chose to fall in love with the wrong person. Either way, I would no longer believe the lies my so-called boyfriend Tega continues to tell me.

Anyone who knew Jenny Smith would know that I was one who believed in fairy tales and couldn't wait for my prince charming to sweep me off my feet. I am an orphan who spent her whole life feeding from hand to mouth and my friend Lily was managing with the little we could get. That was until I met Tega.

Tega was described as a gentleman. He always cared for me and did so many things for me. He practically brought me out of my life of poverty by opening a huge store for me in a shopping complex and getting me a house of my own with a brand new car. I was so in love and felt nothing could go wrong with my life and Tega was my knight in shining armor.

Perhaps, the luxury he showered on me blinded my sense of reasoning. I didn't see anything wrong in his outpouring of love and flamboyance on me.

Often, my friend Lily complained about why Tega hasn't popped the question but I wasn't bothered since I felt he was just taking his time. I didn't really read much into things because I was blinded by love.

I didn't read much into the fact that the place we stayed together, he had only two shirts and two trousers with a single pair of shoes. Often I wondered where his remaining stuff might be but like I said, I didn't read much into things.

A time came when he told me he was to visit Dubai for a business meeting and was to stay for two months. Of course I believed him only to get the shocker of my life when I decided to visit a shopping mall to get my groceries in a nearby town.

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On getting to the mall, I saw a man who had the same structure and walking steps like Tega and was holding an older woman acting all lovey and stuff, but I couldn't conclude since he was backing me. He was even wearing the same clothes as Tega and I felt this might not be a coincidence after all and decided to approach the man. On getting to him, I tapped him and he turned around only for me to get the shocker of my life, it was indeed Tega.

I felt so betrayed when I saw the wedding band on the woman's finger and a little boy ran over to them calling Tega his father. The shock was just too much for me and so I fainted. waking up, I saw Tega and the unknown woman with some workers around me asking me questions if I was okay. What really shocked me was the fact that Tega pretended as if he did not know me at all. I immediately tried to tell the woman everything and instead she shouted at me saying all kinds of things like

"You are just delusional and insane. I don't know you and I know my husband doesn't either. My husband treats me like the queen of his world and wouldn't ever cheat on me so I am sure you do not know what you're saying"

She got so angry and left the shopping mall. I went home and cried my eyes out and later on, Tega came over to the house shouting about how I tried to ruin his marriage with my childish behaviour and that I was supposed to understand being the other woman outside his marriage life.

One thing he said that really shook me to the core was when he told me there were four other women like me and none was complaining and still I tried to disgrace him.

I was in so much pain and as much as he gave me all the money I could've ever wanted, I just couldn't stay with someone with so much lies. I felt men are scum and not to be trusted. I had to move on with my life and I am fending for myself very well without any contributions from a man. Indeed you wouldn't know how strong you are until being strong is the only option you have left.



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This is such a gently developed narrative one might not feel the tension building--the essential conflict of this story. But the conflict is there, and because you build it gently it does not end up being a soap opera. You do a really good job. The young lady is a very credible character. Her acceptance of Tega's duplicity is understandable. Everything seemed to be so good, and her life had been so hard up until then.

Your resolution is also credible. He is not sorry. His wife is not angry. The only one who hurts is our young lady.

Great use of the prompt (she cries) and great application of the skill challenge. Thank you for supporting other authors in the community. We are glad to see that you remembered to link the story to the prompt post this week :)

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You gave such a great critique of this story and I like it so very much. You were able to deduce the gentleness of the conflict in the lines even though it was kind of hidden.
I appreciate the constructive analysis of this piece by you.

Thank you again.

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I liked your story today, mrenglish. You deliver a message, but you don't lecture. You describe an amoral man, and a wounded girl, but you do not engage in melodrama. The circumstance of this young woman is quite understandable. Tega's cruel selfishness is, unfortunately, not surprising.

Good writing!

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Many thanks. I'm glad I was able to pull you in this time while looking forward to keeping the tempo.
Thank you for liking this.

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Oh you know I think doing background checks on who one is dating can never hurt especially in these times. Many ladies have been deceived into relations with married men. This doesn't end well. Nice story.

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Background checks are very cogent, it will help one could the heart breaks that comes with such relationships.
Thank you for stopping by.

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This story is so relatable. I know a lot of people this has happened to. That’s why I’m really extra careful when it comes to matters of the heart.

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I still wonder why men feel like they can have anything or do anything they want in the world without considering the females involved.

He is a cheater and I wouldn't blame the female character who fell for Tega's pampering because she was in a situation that needed help but moving on after knowing who Tega is makes me admire the character.

Great story.

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That was so heartbreaking for the young lady.
Indeed, not all that glitters is gold.
The best part is she was able to pick herself up and move on no matter what. That's encouraging. ☺️

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Yeah, she did.
Many hearts have been broken as such.

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