RE: Hive open mic week 79 Mirrors ( Espejos) Lil Wayne Ft Bruno Mars ENG|SPN

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Hey there @ebingo

I do love your playing & singing of this song!! Nice!
Just one thing, maybe a bit of more text would be good in the post :)

Oh, the song just stopped at one point, have you noticed that?



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Thank you very much...I love showing up here every week...this week has been very busy but I still wanted ro show up.

I made a mistake at the ending so I cut it out...

I'll try to add more detail to the write up.

Thank you so much for looking out for us here in Hive open mic...❤❤❤

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You are welcome @ebingo

I am glad you took this as advice how to improve and not as a critique 😊 I know that you can write nicely and that there is a bunch of difficulties you face, so I also take my time to visit your post and listen to you :)
And I am still happy that Fernando and you are supporting each other, well, it is a perfect sign that real engagement helps making new friendships 🎶🎶🎶 Horray 🌠

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🙂🙂

You're the best ma'am. Hope you're enjoying you're week.

Thanks for stopping by❤❤

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I've fixed up the writing a bit

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Well, from 73 words up to 1107 is a good improvement ;) 👏

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