Life

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Silence, full of sound
Like ice in boiling spring
Wave swings in reserve direction
Strangling the life out of fish

Apples, meant for the eyes
But lost and found it wasn't
Pondering the minds with thoughts unknown
Leaving the hands full of mangoes


Eternal, but not forever
The deceit, called truth
So beautiful like the flower rose🌹
Yet thorns it possess as nature


Clear in a line of sight (LOS)
But blurrier than the frosted glass
The absent mind sees a smooth
Yet Rocky is the way


Success, not the weak
Shallow grounds levels not
From progressing up the hill
Where the lights hits the road.


Hola, this is a Poem written by me just this morning. I was wondering about the journey of life and the turns it takes on the long run, then the inspiration to put up the poem came in. By profession, I'm not a poet but I do it as a hobby. For real, being a member of this poets community is one of the best thing I enjoy most since I joined the hive platform. Though it doesn't pay like other communities but it's our duty as poets to paint the happenings of the world with words. I really do appreciate everyone active in this community especially my every week responders @joseitosanchezs @gone-hive @emmaba1 @pappyelbranco @channell1 @cesarj21 @sgarciacine @penyaircyber @repayme4568 and finally the admin of the year @dbooster. You guyz are all wonderful.



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Silence, full of sound.
Yes you have made it clearer because it is only in the silent moment, you will have the loudest sound where your mind will speak.

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The loudness in silence is unpredictable. I'm glad you liked it

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You're very right. As poets, we get to paint the world in beautiful ways and I enjoy being a part of this community. It's an honour being here.
I had exams yesterday so I've been a bit inactive here this week, is have replied this since.
Have a splendid day

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Beautiful poem and very nice image, thanks for the mention in your post, I also have quite a lot of appreciation for you ☺ regards my friend ♥

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You always give us good content, more knowledge and wisdom from above 💯🙏

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