Poem 1 Eng-Esp

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I want to take off your wrapper
and let my cannibalistic desires
to have free rein.

To run in your green sweat
embrace your thought
to think of you as no one has ever done.

I am a criminal who has come to steal you,
I've come to take your thought.
To kiss your elegant strawberry lips.

Come hit me with your projectile,
come to my chest and pierce it,
Come to my bed and sleep with me.

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Quiero quitarte la envoltura
y que mis deseos caníbales
tengan rienda suelta.

Correrme de tu sudor verde
abrazar tu pensamiento
pensarte cómo nadie lo ha hecho.

Soy un delincuente que ha venido a robarte,
He venido a quedarme con tu pensamiento.
Besarte tus elegantes labios de fresa.

Ven impactame con tu proyectil,
ven a mi pecho y traspasalo,
Ven a mi cama y duerme conmigo.



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5 years this has been happening to me, it started here, around people that are still here. Homeland security has done nothing at all, they are not here to protect us. Dont we pay them to stop shit like this? The NSA, CIA, FBI, Police and our Government has done nothing. Just like they did with the Havana Syndrome, nothing. Patriot Act my ass. The American government is completely incompetent. The NSA should be taken over by the military and contained Immediately for investigation. I bet we can get to the sources of V2K and RNM then. https://peakd.com/gangstalking/@acousticpulses/electronic-terrorism-and-gaslighting--if-you-downvote-this-post-you-are-part-of-the-problem

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Buenas letras, directas como balas de amor. Excelente. Un abrazo...

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Buenas letras, directas como balas de amor. Excelente. Un abrazo...

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I love the turn in the last line, with its (almost) literal meaning. After all the passionate, fancy metaphors in the rest of the poem, this comes off as a simple statement of fact, and feels sincere and honest, more honest I think because of the contrast with the rest of the poem. It made me go 'oh' as I was finishing. Very nice.

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Soy un delincuente que ha venido a robarte,
He venido a quedarme con tu pensamiento.
Besarte tus elegantes labios de fresa.

Me encanto mucho esta parte de tu poema con mucho sentimiento, me encanto, gracias por compartir esta bonita pieza =)

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