HIE OPENMIC WEEK #123: GIMME YOU -AN ORIGINAL BY JAYDR

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Hello everyone this is hive openmic wk 123 and I'm grateful to God that we all are and here this week Hale and hearty.

On this occasion of open mic we have a beautiful topic titled "a better world for all" which was suggested by @daniky.

Indeed this topic at this very point in time is very crucial and one that all of us needs to work towards, pray towards and also hope towards.

If we are honest with ourselves we would realise that the world deserves to be a better place for everyone for the father who toys daily to make ends meet and for the mother who make sure that the home is kept and children are fed and for the young and for the old everyone deserves a better place.

But how can we arrive at the world we all want, a world where peace and harmony reigns award where all that we need are within reach, a world where Justice prevails, a world where everyone understands the goal and division to work towards.

It takes people to make the world a better place yes everyone who was involved, the things you say and do contributes to make someone's world better you may not be able to change the world but we are show you that you can do the little you can to make the world a better place.

For me I am glad that I found a place here on hive where I have a world which is very promising to change the world for the better.

And hence I decided to share one of my earliest written songs a song I wrote while in medical school I remember going back that I had to leave my room which was quite noisy to what's the backyard of the hostel and sat down with my guitar and wrote this song for the first time.

The song is titled "Gimme you"
In this song I looked around and ID found that what we really desire may not be something we can get our own selves or with our strength if we won the BET award then we would need to look deeper and upper because only God can make this world a better place for all and through all.

We need love we need patience we also need courage and strength to stand for the things that are right and obey the principles of peace. Until then, we can really have a better world for all.

Here is the lyrics

GIMME YOU

peace that keeps our broken hearts are aligned
joy that sets our hearts on fire
love that makes us never stop giving back

gimme that
gimme more

power to say no when everyone else believes
courage to fight off the fears of the week
grace to stand strong even while on our knees
give me that
give me more

Strength to see more than just what lies ahead
patience to hold on and wait with nothing here
hope that makes us believe for another day
give me that
give me more

Faith thatmake promises based on a promise
truth that lights a torch in a dark dark world
a friend that knows your wrongs and still love you the same
give me that
give me more

give me you Lord
give me more of you

THANKS FOR BEING A PART OF THIS POST.


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Hi there @jaydr

Nice entry, as you always bring us good work ;)
Thank you for your song

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Thanks so much.
Sorry I haven't been in touch.
Should I say welcome back. .
Thanks for all you do.

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Tell me who wouldn't love to have a better world? We all do and that brings Joy and happiness to us, seeing the world is free of evil and bad stuff. We all should be after unity and not dividing ourselves because we will always fall.

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Thanks so much.
Well there ll always be varieties in the new world we want. We all just need to find what makes us the same.

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Absolutely fantastic bro. This one reminds me of Ziggy Marley. The sound of the guitar ,your voice and the lyrical content is all very reminiscent of Ziggy.

One of these days we gonna get you to the UK , I have so many friends here that would be very happy to work with you and get you in the recording studio :).

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Haha.. I should look up Ziggy .. got his work on YouTube.

Would love to be in the UK for music hehe. That would be beautiful.. looking foreward to it. Hehe.

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