RE: His True Colors
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This is an intense story that grips the reader, @ubani1. You enter a slightly incomprehensible emotional zone as you seem to want to create an aura of mystery with the male character. Good handling of the tension.
You might want to check the editing of the text, you have repeated phrases several times.
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Thank you so for the kind review.