Hive Open Mic Week 96 Neuvos Tiempos- A new wave [original]

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I hope I'm able to complete this post before the deadline...but if I'm not I have to apologize for being late.

I have said many times that I'm still finding time to study for my exams and I am for real this time.

I plan on buying a guitar next week that I am not going to use for much. Posting here takes a lot of time because of my weak laptop and I have a weak laptop because I want to reward myself with a new one once I pass this exam.

This also going to mean I have to sacrifice posting here on Hive because I am taking all my energy to read and to go to work as the two most important things to me.

The song

I took out the bridge of the song What do I know by Ed Sheeran. I also stole his lyrics in the third verse.

I feel music is fluid like that, change the instrument and you have a new song.

I made it a little old school with an electronic piano revamp.

The Art

Did you see what I did there?

You didn't?

There is love on the land dissolved by a new wave...Also, it looks like Africa or one of those lazy artist works that are super expensive...But what do I know?

Lyrics

Everybody talking about this new wave, this new way to treat each other
Everybody's getting on this new wave, a new way to treat each other.

Everybody talking about this new wave, this new way to treat each other
Everybody's getting on this new wave, a new way to treat each other.

The heart, it comes soul, it captures whole and then it takes control

Its La la la la la love

Its La la la la la love

The revelations coming its a minute away I saw people marching on the streets today
You know we're all made up of love and hate but both them are balanced on a razor blade

The heart, it comes soul, it captures whole and then it takes control

Its La la la la la love

Its La la la la la love

[INSTRUMENTAL]


Espero poder completar esta publicación antes de la fecha límite... pero si no lo hago, tengo que disculparme por llegar tarde.

He dicho muchas veces que todavía estoy encontrando tiempo para estudiar para mis exámenes y esta vez voy en serio.

Planeo comprar una guitarra la próxima semana que no voy a usar mucho. Publicar aquí toma mucho tiempo debido a mi computadora portátil débil y tengo una computadora portátil débil porque quiero recompensarme con una nueva una vez que apruebe este examen.

Esto también significará que tengo que sacrificar la publicación aquí en Hive porque estoy tomando toda mi energía para leer e ir a trabajar como las dos cosas más importantes para mí.

La canción

Saqué el puente de la canción What do I know de Ed Sheeran. También robé su letra en el tercer verso.

Siento que la música es fluida así, cambia el instrumento y tienes una nueva canción.

Lo hice un poco de la vieja escuela con una renovación de piano electrónico.

El arte

¿Viste lo que hice allí?

¿No lo hiciste?

Hay amor en la tierra disuelto por una nueva ola... Además, parece África o una de esas obras de artista perezoso que son súper caras... ¿Pero qué sé yo?

Letra

Todos hablando de esta nueva ola, esta nueva forma de tratarnos
Todo el mundo se está subiendo a esta nueva ola, una nueva forma de tratarse unos a otros.

Todos hablando de esta nueva ola, esta nueva forma de tratarnos
Todo el mundo se está subiendo a esta nueva ola, una nueva forma de tratarse unos a otros.

El corazón, viene el alma, captura todo y luego toma el control

Es La la la la la amor

Es La la la la la amor

Las revelaciones que vienen están a un minuto. Vi gente marchando en las calles hoy.
Sabes que todos estamos hechos de amor y odio, pero ambos están en equilibrio sobre una hoja de afeitar.

El corazón, viene el alma, captura todo y luego toma el control

Es La la la la la amor

Es La la la la la amor


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Hey there @ebingo

You are not late, the entry is on time :) It's week 95, but I see you already noticed that small detail. Ow, studying for exams and working at the same time! Wow, difficult.

I like your efforts to bring original songs, they are nice. Music from others can influence us, as you have been influenced by Ed Shiran :)

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Broooooo, I hope this week is successful, you pass that exam with a good grade ✔️, you can give yourself the laptop 💻 and you can also have the guitar 🎸 we've had too busy days....

I liked your song a lot, in fact the sound you gave to the keyboard makes it retro style, I liked the dynamics of the chords and how you handled it vocally; at the end in that instrumental part I imagined a saxophone accompanying you and during the whole song a good electronic drum beat reinforcing the style more... good job my Bro, success and blessings for all to come 👊😎🔥🎙️🎹🎶❤️🌟🍻💥💫💯

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This is so lovely to listen to @ebingo
And it's an original.
I like the keyboard accompaniment.
I just vibed to the smooth flow of it.

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