RE: Anticlimactic -- a five-minute #freewrite
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Okay, so that was the greatest letdown ever ...
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Okay, so that was the greatest letdown ever ...
Yep, hence the "anticlimactic." 😅 It's what came out in the time-frame so I went with it. I don't think it's finished yet though.
The voice hasn't been resolved, and I'm sensing the mention of 'honey' will irk Jenny.
She's had bad experiences.
Yes, I can tell she has ... there IS a lot of story left to tell there ...
He sabotaged her job interview!! With a 3-Stooges or Laurel and Hardy level of slapstick "humor" - the kind that wouldn't amuse me if I were the victim. Wow. I'm in some kind of mood, if I find myself siding with Jenny. :) Joey is fun but he needs to grow up... where are these thoughts coming from? It's like I'm the one hearing voices now (as Jenny did last week). And for her to hit a bicyclist, then take his bike... WTF, Jenny???? And what's with the satellite exploding above them...? Ready for the next installment!
The satellite was random, haha! Just trying to get all the prompts in however I could. At least there are no aliens.
I always side with Jenny. I love Joey but when I write Jenny and Her Irritability it's usually because I've had a bad day and I want the angst out of my system. :) But lately it's just to get whatever I can out of Joey and Jenny to be inspired for a proper book later. And I feel like I'm forcing the Joey because of it.
Latest prompts are Oatmeal and Cannibals........ this is going to be interesting, HAHA!