When You Left

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Like a needle with no thread

Like a carpenter with no hammer

An assassin with no threat

A tree with no leaf

My heart feels lifeless

What is left of me

The blood in my veins feels poisoned

My tongue tasteless

My life as good as dead

No colours

Just grey

I have been searching for a meaning

All I know about love has forsaken me

The magic I felt with you

No longer exists

Its tragic

Leaving without saying goodbye hurts deep in my soul

Yet, you swore that you love me

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@dante31 Beautiful poem, I feel in each word, in each line like an echo of emotions that transport me to my love from the past who one day became the love of my life, the next day he became a shooting star, he left without warning and without anesthesia. But life goes on. I love this quote:

"I've been searching for meaning, everything I know about love has abandoned me.
The magic I felt with you It no longer exists."

Your poem has deeply touched my soul. Greetings 🤗

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Thank you for reading and commenting. I felt my thoughts were just wandering this space endlessly.

Thank you again. I'll try to post more.

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