My Friend Moses: A Poem

Moses


I have one friend
Moses
water beads on his black boots
with silken mud from parting the puddle
it makes him pause, sucking on his cigarette
like a nipple

these puddles gathered last Thanksgiving
languishing brown in gravel
beds
and gazing at puddle-hopping dead leaves
on the hazy dance floor
but, Moses said, the barn wasn't red and that newly weaned
calf nodding an emphatic yes against the door
was just a restless dream
in bulls balls

Moses sometimes wonders what water
molecules say at reunions of annual
strangers after they parachute tumbling
from thick black clouds into soiled
bath tubs
I tell him its the usual gripe of Mormon
wives railing against oxygen
and he stubs his toe in the slick
dirt
like he knows ten commandments
left something out

but rain puddles don't speak to me
much
so I let Moses' cigarette
float its hissing death
while black boots stir the fine silt
to curl like smoke around the swollen butt


Notes

I wrote "Moses" for a poetry class at a satellite campus of Indiana University back in the late '90s.

It doesn't seem like I wrote it though. I mean, I have intimate knowledge, intimate memories, of the guy who wrote this, but he is no longer me.

I don't think I would return to that point of my journey, that particular state of my form, if given the chance. But there is something in my old work, some quality of the creative spark, that I wonder if I've lost.

Perhaps so. Maybe that 'quality' is just youth, and it is both inevitable and perfectly natural to lose it.

Probably some other quality has grown in its place.

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Image from Pixabay, by distelAPPArath.


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I've seen many attempts at creating a poetry community since I joined the blockchain in 2018; most never seem to get off the ground. Blockchain Poets, though small, has the feel of a thriving community, a real place where poets can meet and share their work.

If you're a poet, it's definitely worth checking out. I almost hate to advertise it, though: at the moment it is just small enough to feel like a writing group.




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much in-built music, here, and strangely erotic... nipple, balls, butt.
good to be aware of your work, poet.

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Lol, I was young, so of course my poetry was about sex! Thanks for reading. :)

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Indiana University in the 90s. You weren't too far from me then. At around the same time, I was at Ball State. Not writing poetry, unfortunately, but studying Japanese which would aid me in my growing love of haiku and with my current life. As to your rambling thought: I think the creative spark of youth is different from the creative spark of middle age and still different from the creative spark of old age. As we change, so does our inspiration and our creativity.

Very creative poem. Thanks for sharing it! The first of many more to come to hope 😃

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No kidding. You were at Ball State? I partied at Ball State a few times. Based on my experience, I'm surprised anything was taught or learned on that campus, lol. Anyway, yes, I will be sharing more poetry here. I have about three in the works and plenty of old ones (which often end up being 'in the works' when I revisit them, so who knows how long it will take to actually publish here again!)

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Or.. probably that cuality is just slepp. Waiting for that spark

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What a nice reflection on Moses, very striking your writing and very nice photo.

Hugs

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To step in the same ocean again might posses a mind like a fiend trying for the same high.

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Is that your line? Has potential.

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Tis mine, words put together inspired from your poem.

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