RE: An Open Host
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I was so angry with the father that I almost thought he deserved having a demon in his son. Almost :), but that was dreadful, and so convincing. You did a great job spinning a yarn with a moral without enunciating that moral.
@jayna is always instructing, 'Show, don't tell'. That's what you do here. Very good writing.
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Thank so much for your kind words. I appreciate 🙏😌