El jugador (Poema)

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Y qué si el dado gira en desventaja
Qué más da si es par o none

Somos la apuesta que no se ha perdido

Tu sonrisa en la mesa
Sobre cartas abiertas

Senderos del azar
Yo gano solo al verla

Y qué si soy el que fía y el deudor

Dejo mi resto

Barajo el mazo que otorga el destino
No se si es truco
O tal vez desatino

Ser por ti
Para bien o para mal
El jugador.

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So what if the die turns disadvantageous?
So what if it's even or none

We're the bet that hasn't been lost

Your smile on the table
On open cards

Paths of chance
I win only by seeing her

So what if I am the one who trusts and the debtor

I leave my remainder

I shuffle the deck that destiny gives me
I don't know if it's a trick
Or maybe it's a blunder

To be for you
For better or for worse
The player.

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Interesante modo poético de ver la relación con la amada o deseada a través del juego, en el que nos sometemos al azar, a su libre discurrir, sin saber su final. Buenas imágenes verbales y logrado ritmo. Saludos, @adriangamerxd.

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What is the theme of your poem? Faith in love or risk in love? Or something else, I wonder.

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There is not love whit out risk or faith.

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hehe yeah but which one is the focus in here?

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Faith in love

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Loved your poem. It wasn't a typical love poem and had depths which was blurred, and somehow I like it that way. Nice one.

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Thanks, im glad you like it. It is about to tell what everybody tells but in a new way isn't?

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I feel that you have played pretty well with the concept; "faith in love". Because of this, the speaker has more depth to it, which is what makes it unique in a way, in my view.

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I think you really got the meaning of the poem. He doesn't risk love, he pull his faith in love cause in the end love worth even if you lose

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Gran poema amigo, simplemente genial ♥

Ser por ti
Para bien o para mal
El jugador.

Gran reflexión, saludos ☺

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