RE: This fateful day.
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D'ya know what Hon, you're very sharp. That didn't occur to me at all and I actually worked on this story. Normally I just write in one sitting, look over the grammar and then post. With this one, the restricted sentence length meant I was so busy examining each tree I could no longer see the woods.
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Ha, sometimes it takes an objective eye to see these things :D I love the tree/woods analogy and it came it out really well :)